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Morenatsu novelization attempt Anonymous 08/05/2015 (Wed) 16:29:41 No. 567
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Hey. Newb Anon here.

Following the news of the devs nailing the final coffin on Morenatsu, here's something I've been attempting in the past couple of weeks:

No guarantees on when it will be finished, though the rest of the days already have planned outlines.

As for the image, just needed it to post this one :P

Anonymous 08/07/2015 (Fri) 22:24:38 No. 572
Nice story, grammar was good. I liked how you added new concepts to the scene of the first day when the groups meet and still kept most of the information on the 1st Day of August. Keep it up and good luck on writing Torahiko's route

Anonymous 08/10/2015 (Mon) 17:41:26 No. 573

Thanks! Sadly, it might be past August before this is finished.

Anonymous 01/08/2016 (Fri) 14:25:21 No. 619
Pardon me for trying to revive a dead horse, but I'll just leave this here for the interested.

Anonymous 01/17/2016 (Sun) 20:47:24 No. 620
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I'll try and give it a read, thx!

Anonymous 01/29/2016 (Fri) 05:56:22 No. 621
But it's just a retelling of the game in novel format.

Anonymous 01/29/2016 (Fri) 14:19:42 No. 622
In a way, it is. Like I said, I took everything the original devs put out along with some established theories, and added original material. Again, notice additional scenarios for Soutarou and Kyouji. Oh, and the fact that events got rearranged here and there.

For now, it seems like nothing much has changed, but it's because it's the start of things at the moment (Still Aug 5). You can't rush things now, can't you? :P

moai!!Vpw.VX3XQQ 01/30/2016 (Sat) 03:55:57 No. 623
>not giving people comment access
No reason to use google docs then.

Anonymous 01/30/2016 (Sat) 04:12:07 No. 624
I posted the FA link in a latter post. Go for that one instead.

…and let me just edit that link out :P

Anonymous 01/30/2016 (Sat) 04:14:39 No. 625

And there's no edit function.

Anyways, just follow the FA link provided. Sorry for the major inconvenience :(

moai!!Vpw.VX3XQQ 01/30/2016 (Sat) 06:52:40 No. 626
You must not understand how a comment attached to a highlighted section is way more useful than a comment below a text.
I will not check it on FA.

Anonymous 01/30/2016 (Sat) 07:00:31 No. 627
Comments have been opened for the GDocs one. :/

moai!!Vpw.VX3XQQ 01/30/2016 (Sat) 20:38:19 No. 628
Okidoki. I'll read it sometime today when I log into my Google account.

Anonymous 02/15/2016 (Mon) 16:53:35 No. 632
(In advance, sorry for the necro)

Update: finally got a Torahiko scenario out. But I'd reckon you'd want to start at the first part of the day so here:

Anonymous 03/06/2016 (Sun) 05:36:53 No. 633
August 5 ends with firefly watching:

Had it not been for my green notebook where I wrote the outline reminding me to complete this, I probably won't :P

Anonymous 03/06/2016 (Sun) 19:04:36 No. 634
Fingers crossed for Tens route.

Anonymous 03/07/2016 (Mon) 14:22:42 No. 635
Well he doesn't have a route, but he does play a major part later on ;) [/teaser]

Anonymous 03/07/2016 (Mon) 14:35:17 No. 636
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Hey now that I think about it, wouldn't Ten winning the karate thing be the whole reason you got banged by Juuichi in the first place?
I don't know why but I think so, mabye cause he distracted shun?

Anonymous 03/07/2016 (Mon) 14:50:35 No. 637
>Shun cockblocks you

Anyway, anyone else feels like the neutral ending to shuns route is kinda stupid?

He acts like a child and Hiro has to basically rape him otherwise he gets shafted on the festival.

Speaking of the festival, imma listen to the OST again.

Anonymous 03/07/2016 (Mon) 18:34:16 No. 638
It's Judo actually :P
That's the neutral ending? I thought the neutral ending was where you meet him, Tarou and Shin talking about shit and you missing something.

Anonymous 03/13/2016 (Sun) 05:04:57 No. 639
August 6 starts:

I have more progress with this than with my thesis proposal XD

moai!!Vpw.VX3XQQ 03/14/2016 (Mon) 05:15:51 No. 640
What's your thesis on?

Anonymous 03/14/2016 (Mon) 06:01:39 No. 641
Sales Force Automation System

Anon Author 03/24/2016 (Thu) 11:50:53 No. 642
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So yeah, text on image says it all. That aside, Here's an update. Kenji takes the spotlight this time:

And just one more day before the first week is complete! Funny though, I started this thing back in August :P

This is gonna be a while.

Anon Author 03/25/2016 (Fri) 10:50:02 No. 643
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First, LOL I forgot to change the user name. Oh well, at this point you probably know my common user handle :P

Also, Double update in a week! August 6 ends with the test of courage:

Thanks for everyone who kept reading and faving by the way. Don't forget to give feedback if you can. It would be very helpful :)

(Image unrelated; just there in case mg's reply bugs like hell again)

Aug 7 Anon Author 04/14/2016 (Thu) 16:55:49 No. 644
August 7 START!

TBH though, some parts of the VN are better off summarized if done in novel form as some just look dead awkward done straight.

Anonymous 04/14/2016 (Thu) 19:02:36 No. 645
I meant to say that it's stupid how Shun's neutral ending is so… It just suddenly ends. Feels horribly written tbh.

Anonymous 04/15/2016 (Fri) 00:48:47 No. 646
Ah that. Yeah it just seemed so abrupt. Could've used more work :P

Anon Author 04/15/2016 (Fri) 17:29:36 No. 647
If the Beach scenario is taking this long, I fear for what the Camping Trip and the Bon Festival will bring.

Second part:

But even so, I still need to…
Stay determined.

I'll sit in my corner.

Anon Author 04/20/2016 (Wed) 18:54:32 No. 648
Beach day has ended, but the day's not over just yet!

Anon Author 04/21/2016 (Thu) 17:36:38 No. 649
Breather story featuring Nana:

Wow, I just released multiple stories in consecutive days. That's an achievement!

Anon Author 05/10/2016 (Tue) 08:32:30 No. 650

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